tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034738644395465127.post378372100670126895..comments2024-03-26T14:15:48.914+04:00Comments on AbdulAziz Mohammed: ~I~AbdulAziz Mohammedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03248922908856507782noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034738644395465127.post-29235406809714122732010-12-13T13:18:51.524+04:002010-12-13T13:18:51.524+04:00thanks Shahd for your valuable comment, I will kee...thanks Shahd for your valuable comment, I will keep it in mind ^_^AbdulAziz Mohammedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03248922908856507782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3034738644395465127.post-28491311141412704162010-12-09T11:18:00.114+04:002010-12-09T11:18:00.114+04:00Your a brilliant writer. You have great vocab and ...Your a brilliant writer. You have great vocab and great diction. But somehow the rhyming scheme feels forced here. I could be imposing my own feelings here just a little cuz I've always felt stifled when it comes to rhyming that I don't have freedom to move as much as I'd like. And the business related rhymes are killing me here! lol<br /><br />I mentioned that I admire how you write in both Arabic and English. When you write posts, your language seems mashallah seemless Bilingual in every sense of the word. Except here. When I compare your arabic poem to your English one, I see where your strength is at. Its Arabic. <br /><br />So when you write, I notice you imposing your Arabic rules in English. The strict rhyming structure. There was a poem awhile back that had a beginning but no real conclusion and the ideas seemed seperate, because that's okay in Arabic. Keep on experimenting with your writing the way u've been doing. Experiment with different styles and try to notice where the Arabic background comes in. It should fix itself as long as your aware of it.Shahoodehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01936672279952603375noreply@blogger.com